Liittle Bear Creepypasta: "When The Woods Fall Down" (Part III) by Christian Lizotte (+ Review)

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Hello there, and welcome to my Youtube Channel. My name is The Shadow Reader (or Shadow for Short), and I'd like to thank you for watching today's episode. If your brand new here to this channel, then I suggest that you continue to read on in the decription, so that a few things can be made clear.

What my Youtube channel was created for, was originally to narrate Lost Episode Creepypastas and the like. Why would I do that? Well to be honest with all of you, I feel as though the "Lost Episode" genera of Creepypastas seems to be a subject that nobody else would really cover..so I decided to dedicate my channel to nearly forgotten subject. However, as the years went by, I've vehemently decided to start reviewing the stories that I narrate, in order to help future writers of all sorts learn from their mistakes, and strive to do better.

Now, please understand one major thing...and hear me out on this good. I DO NOT criticize stories just for the sake of being a jerk to others. While I certainly can get rather annoyed, and a bit angry, at the constant usage of cliches and bad grammar in a storyline, I only do it for the sake of the author, and out of love for all my fellow Creepypasta writers.

With that said though, I've decided against ranting as much as I have done in the past, and instead focus on breaking down the story paragraph by paragraph to point out the storyline, plot development, proper description,, the grammar, any and all cliches, and lastly the punctuation marks...ect.

Also, as a warning to all on this channel, If you can't handle an honest opinion in regards to literary criticism..then don't even bother sending in your story, as I will not read it if you're not open to improvement.

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Track: AVIIRA - Tyranny
Link: https://youtu.be/nIjhIHNLGlc

Link to the Various Music Artist and Works that I use in my videos:

Myuu: https://www.youtube.com/user/myuuji

Kevin McLeod: https://www.youtube.c..