Full Analysis and Review: Breach of Peace by Daniel B. Greene | Chapter 1

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1:42:30 Summary

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In this video, we are going to read through Daniel Green's first novella, Breach of Peace, to examine exactly why people are complaining about its poor quality. We explore topics like how titles and covers can conflict, how a first chapter SHOULD be written, inconsistent characters, and our favorite: postmodernism.

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Music featured in this video(in order):

Silent Hill 3 OST - End of Small Santurary
8 Bit Universe - Toccata and fugue in D minor(8bit version)
The Darkness OST - Assorted Tracks
Final Fantasy 9 OST - Assorted Tracks
RyanAvx - Resident Evil Save Room Theme 8 bit
American McGee’s Alice OST - Assorted Tracks
Bulby - Professor E. Gadd 8 bit
Ren and Stimpy - Assorted Tracks
Alice Madness Returns -Assorted Tracks
The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion OST - Assorted Tracks
Jam - 8bit Fantasy(Mariah Carey cover)