00:00 Introduction
14:56 Prologue
17:53 Page 1
31:00 Page 2
46:18 Page 3
1:04:53 Page 4
1:20:25 Page 5
1:31:26 Page 6
1:37:48 Page 7 & 8
1:45:51 Page 9 & 10
1:56:10 Page 11 & 12
2:06:17 Summary
#bookreview #authortube #writingadvice
Avatar art by…
00:00 Introduction
14:56 Prologue
17:53 Page 1
31:00 Page 2
46:18 Page 3
1:04:53 Page 4
1:20:25 Page 5
1:31:26 Page 6
1:37:48 Page 7 & 8
1:45:51 Page 9 & 10
1:56:10 Page 11 & 12
2:06:17 Summary
#bookreview #authortube #writingadvice
Avatar art by Troubledcat(https://twitter.com/_Troubled_Cat_)
In this video, we are going to read through Lindsay Ellis’ failed novel introduction to her sci-fi romance series, Axiom’s End, to examine exactly why people are complaining about its poor quality and terrible writing. We explore topics like how titles and covers can conflict, how a first chapter SHOULD be written, inconsistent characters, how symbolism works, and our favorite: postmodernism. Yes, again…
Follow me on alternative media to stay updated on my videos and storytelling:
Gab: https://gab.com/ErwinBlackthorn
Minds: https://www.minds.com/erwintheauthor/
Parler: https://parler.com/user/Erwinblackthorn
Rumble: https://rumble.com/user/erwinblackthorn
Join my subreddit for writing advice and to chat about media: https://www.reddit.com/r/TDLH/
Music featured in this video(in order):
Studio Megaane - X-files 8-bit
SpongeBob soundtrack - Horlepiep
Xenosaga Episode 1 OST - U.M.N. Mode
Crash Bandicoot 1 OST - Cortex Power
Deus Ex OST - UNATCO
Final Fantasy 7 - Wall Market Theme
Resonance of Fate OST - Home Sweet Home
Final Fantasy X-2 OST - Joost Leave It Tae Us!
Persona 3 OST - Just Want To Be Close
Spiderman 2: Enter Electro OST - Assorted Tracks
Crash Bandicoot 2 OST - Rock It, Pack Attack
Sonic The Hedgehog OST - Starlight Zone
THPS 2 - menu music
Meme Music - B Witched - C'est La Vie Instrumental SEGA Chiptune Remix(their channel: https://www.youtube.com/c/MemeMusic)
